Saturday, October 22, 2011

Imagine someone you know is taking this course and has decided to write about you. Write their piece for them! -week 7


Amy never misses class and you can tell she really wants to be here. She always sits up tall in her sit and talks a lot in class. She give off an air of self confidence, she is a woman of many untold truths. You can tell that she takes school very serious, she wants good grades and to learn. She’s not just going to school because it’s the next thing to do or it’s what she is supposes to do, she wants it. 
She tends to speak first then, realizes that her foot in her mouth so she has to stop and back track to make sure she didn’t hurt anyone feelings. She can be quick to judge and forgive; she lets the true you come out. She is “quick with a joke and a light for your smoke.” Amy is free spirited and closed minded at the same time. If you want a friend for life show your true colors and she will accept you forever.

1 comment:

  1. Starts strong, tends to vague out in graf 2, which demands examples for sentences 1 & 2 at least. Some prompts jazz writers, others don't--that's my read here.

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